7 Responses

  1. bahu saras….

    Maanvi kyaank khovai gayo che aa Matlabi duniya ni bhid maa.

    Haqikat ne shabdo ketli saralta thi varnavi che tame…

  2. duniya na dastoor to eva nirala j hoy che pan kyak vanchelu….

    Be original to urself. its better 2b hated 4 wat u r den 2b loved 4 wat u r not…..

    so tame je cho te j raho duniya mate aatma ne khokhlo karvo kai saru nahi…..

    very nice thoughts.

  3. jordar ..j che…
    new thim che…
    maja avi…

  4. written with lot of pain…but it is really expressing all the present tense of culture and human running behind nothing…
    proud to read such poem friendly speaking…

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